Many times, editors will say that the writer’s “voice” in a manuscript is what catches their attention.
Voice is hard to define, even for industry professionals. It’s that intangible something that makes a string of prose unique to the author, and a strong voice is what will make an editor interested in a manuscript.
But one thing common to all writers who have strong writers’ voices is that their word choices and phrasing are very unique and vibrant.
Whether you have discovered and developed your writer’s voice or not, here are a few tips for polishing your writing to make it stand out more with strong words and brilliant prose.
Use Strong Verbs
In general, a sentence with “was XX-ing” in it is a weaker sentence than one with a strong action verb.
He was walking down the boulevard.
Versus
- He marched down the boulevard.
- He stumbled down the boulevard.
- He strutted down the boulevard.
- He slunk down the boulevard.
But a good trick is to do a “Find” and “Replace” in your computer word processing program and “Find” every “was” and/or “ing.” Then “Replace” them with a strong action verb.
Use Emotional Words
There are certain words that invoke a strong emotion in readers’ thoughts and visceral reactions. Take advantage of those words when revising your prose.
The lemon tasted sour.
Versus
She bit into the lemon slice, and the juices tingled down her tongue and across her teeth to bite into her cheeks.
- “lemon slice” is a visual picture
- “tongue” “teeth” “cheeks” induces the reader to think of their own mouth
- “tingled” and “bite” stimulates a visceral reaction in the reader
Add As Many Power Words As Possible
Be very exacting when looking at your sentences—go through them with a slow, deliberate eye. Weigh each phrase, each word, and see if you can think of a stronger verb, a more emotional descriptor, a more specific noun.
A good rule of thumb is to try to add some sort of “power word” to every single sentence. Do not leave a sentence unrevised unless it already has at least one “power word” in it, and you can’t think of any better words to replace what’s already there.
Do This Only In Revisions
While these tips are good for when you’re revising your manuscript, it’s best not to even think about these when you’re writing fresh prose.
When you’re writing, you’re in creative right-brain mode and should just let the words flow out of you. Being in full creative right-brain mode is usually best for when you’re “in the zone” in terms of your writing.
Any type of self-editing is a left-brain activity and will pull you out of your creative right-brain mode, and out of “the zone.” So save the revision tips for later.
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